Comments for http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com Tue, 14 Jul 2009 15:35:44 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Does this never end? by typhoid mary http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2008/07/19/does-this-never-end/#comment-56 typhoid mary Tue, 14 Jul 2009 15:35:44 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=22#comment-56 thats cool. i like that. thats cool. i like that.

]]> Comment on Learning things in Mexico. by ben http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2009/03/31/learning-things-in-mexico/#comment-55 ben Thu, 02 Apr 2009 13:16:41 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=283#comment-55 it's true it’s true

]]> Comment on distribute my kings. by katieg4 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2008/07/19/distribute-my-kings/#comment-54 katieg4 Sun, 08 Feb 2009 20:00:13 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=109#comment-54 I have been reading your work in lieu of grad school assignments and do not, in the least feel regret or guilt for the avoidance of school. In college, I became an english lit major after reading female writers and discovering that I was not alone- that there were people in the world who not only felt similar but could amazingly articulate what was going on in my head. I am comforted and inspired by your work and simply want to say "thanks." I have been reading your work in lieu of grad school assignments and do not, in the least feel regret or guilt for the avoidance of school. In college, I became an english lit major after reading female writers and discovering that I was not alone- that there were people in the world who not only felt similar but could amazingly articulate what was going on in my head. I am comforted and inspired by your work and simply want to say “thanks.”

]]> Comment on Half of All This Shit Is Mine. by Undakova http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2009/02/06/half-of-all-this-shit-is-mine/#comment-53 Undakova Sun, 08 Feb 2009 02:23:58 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-53 Thanks cod the direct response on twitter. Glad to view you as a lyricist too. Much respect. I put lyrics up on Undakova.com today. Catch ya later Would write more but iPhone typos annoy me Thanks cod the direct response on twitter. Glad to view you as a lyricist too. Much respect. I put lyrics up on Undakova.com today. Catch ya later
Would write more but iPhone typos annoy me

]]> Comment on Half of All This Shit Is Mine. by ben http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2009/02/06/half-of-all-this-shit-is-mine/#comment-52 ben Sat, 07 Feb 2009 00:07:17 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=257#comment-52 wow. just the fact that you exist is enough to inspire me. i love this. wow. just the fact that you exist is enough to inspire me. i love this.

]]> Comment on Don’t call me dramatic, answer the question by mauraa http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2009/01/12/dont-call-me-dramatic-answer-the-question/#comment-51 mauraa Fri, 06 Feb 2009 17:47:20 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=228#comment-51 this is amazing. its really powerful. this is amazing. its really powerful.

]]> Comment on About by katieg4 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/about/#comment-50 katieg4 Fri, 06 Feb 2009 17:15:40 +0000 #comment-50 As a teacher, I often used music to teach reading and writing poetry. Thanks for sharing your work- I have to express my appreciation of your voice and perspective. Your p.o.v is inspiring. These lines are some of my favs "You’re golden with black inside Outer shine designed to hide" and "All that baggage is bad for your knees He is where my mind is But my heart don’t wanna go back there He wasn’t right for me, but no one ever was And I’d rather lie to myself, than never be in love" Thank you-from those I've read so far, I'm taken back to my freshman year of college when I discovered the importance of each of our own distinct voices. As a teacher, I often used music to teach reading and writing poetry. Thanks for sharing your work- I have to express my appreciation of your voice and perspective. Your p.o.v is inspiring. These lines are some of my favs
“You’re golden with black inside
Outer shine designed to hide”
and
“All that baggage is bad for your knees
He is where my mind is
But my heart don’t wanna go back there

He wasn’t right for me, but no one ever was
And I’d rather lie to myself, than never be in love”
Thank you-from those I’ve read so far, I’m taken back to my freshman year of college when I discovered the importance of each of our own distinct voices.

]]> Comment on The Clouds by Freddy Gipson http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2009/02/03/the-clouds/#comment-49 Freddy Gipson Thu, 05 Feb 2009 04:40:34 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=248#comment-49 I really like your rhyme scheme that you use. Very traditional and easy to understand. I am not completely sure what this poem symbolizes or means for you but to me it reads like this. It is about dying old and frail while still feeling young and reckless and the clouds are what make the passing to Heaven happy and not sad. I liked this a lot. Keep up the good work. I really like your rhyme scheme that you use. Very traditional and easy to understand. I am not completely sure what this poem symbolizes or means for you but to me it reads like this. It is about dying old and frail while still feeling young and reckless and the clouds are what make the passing to Heaven happy and not sad. I liked this a lot. Keep up the good work.

]]> Comment on When you die by noranoir http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2008/09/08/when-you-die/#comment-48 noranoir Wed, 12 Nov 2008 07:40:28 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=192#comment-48 "You’ll sink your way into that black I envy smoothly." I see these words coming from my own lips. I love the way you write. I just wrote a poem about loving someone who acts like a martyr, which causes me a great deal of guilt. Problem is, the sacrifices he makes for me, are NOTHING I have asked for. Go figure. I will be checking in often. I like it all... “You’ll sink your way into that black I envy smoothly.” I see these words coming from my own lips. I love the way you write. I just wrote a poem about loving someone who acts like a martyr, which causes me a great deal of guilt. Problem is, the sacrifices he makes for me, are NOTHING I have asked for. Go figure. I will be checking in often. I like it all…

]]> Comment on take back the light by stephen http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/2008/08/08/take-back-the-light/#comment-47 stephen Sat, 08 Nov 2008 14:03:00 +0000 http://elizabethsewardpoetry.wordpress.com/?p=165#comment-47 i know the feeling. i know the feeling.

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